Comparing Contents Pages

After looking at my first draft, I realised I only had to make a few adjustments. I did this by adding a title to the top photograph to make it seem even. By adding in the title, it also covers up the empty space under the title. The last thing I did was that I moved the page numbers to the top right corner to make it seem neater. but then realised that i looked plain and boring so i looked back at my research and looked at how they placed page numbers. I then changed the titles of the sections and made them capital letters as well as the title of the pages. I then added a grey box to make it look more interesting.  I then changed the title of the page to make it more like my research which i think makes it look more professional. I am extremely happy with my contents page as I used my skills to the best of my ability. I feel it looks professional and like an actual music magazine. Also I feel it meets my target audience as it doesn’t look too childish and it involves thing that my target audience are interested in reading.