Thursday 14 February 2013

Final Edits for Contents Page

 
These are all of the problems I noticed about my magazine, I noticed that the top of the page was too empty and needed to be covered. I realised that the writing that says ‘THE POWER OF 5 BOYS!’ is the title of the arena picture and so I should do that for the picture above. I then noticed that the page numbers on the pictures were placed roughly.


 
To improve the number placement, I put the page numbers in the top right corner to make it look more organised.


 Then to fill in empty space at the top of the first photograph, I added a title like I did for the picture underneath.


After looking at what I thought was my finished contents page, I then noticed even more improvements that needed to be made.




 
I made the title of each section in capital letters to make it so the spacing in the red box was more even. I also noticed that on my research that they had full red boxes and capital letters and so I did the same. In addition, they added a grey box over one section of the writing and so I decided to do the same.


 
Looking back at my research, I realised that they had the title of each page in capitals so I decided to do the same. In addition, the spacing between the line and the numbers and the words had to be made bigger.


 
I then noticed that the numbers were not in line with the writing and so I had to change that to make it look more professional.




 
 
I then noticed that my title did not seem right and needed to be changed. I looked back at my research and noticed that the red banner went all across the page and so I did the same. However, I wanted to make the magazine my own so instead of having the ‘v’ inside the banner, I had it larger to make it look more artistic.




 
I then realised that the mage numbers did not look right and so I looked back to my research and saw that one of the contents pages had the numbers the way I have to make it artistic and fun to read instead of plain and simple.





I then thought that the titles of the pictures did not look right and so I made the spacing around it more even and removed the line underneath and it made it look over crowded.



FINAL CONTENTS PAGE

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